Do you see any patterns?

I use the word “that” frequently throughout my paper, and I use the word this many times as well. One of the bigger things that I noticed, however, was that in several of my transitions, I related back to psychiatry. Although this was not the purpose of my paper, I think that I created a connotation for the reader between working and being a psychiatrist and the idea of balance.  

Do you rely on certain devices more than others?

I definitely use pointer words more than any of the other devices. I feel like this is necessary because if I were to say whatever “this” or “that” was every time, it would be unnecessary and very noticeable to the reader, where this is not.

Are there any passages that are hard to follow?

Not that I can see at this time. I feel like I only need to use pointer words, and I have already done so.